Sorrow & Joy: A Poem In Two Moods

Sorrow

I loosen my grip
and the water
slips through,

falls from my eyes,
tilts my head
back to ground,

muddies my path,
forming puddles
to catch the sky

and a playground
to splash my feet,
spreading out

into a lakebed
where all the life
I have damned

lifts its curse

and there I dive.

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Sorrow & Joy- A Poem In Two Moods
Nick LeForce

The same words can have vastly different feel and impact depending on the label attached and the way they are spoken or the mood within which they are expressed.

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Joy  

I loosen my grip
and the water
slips through,

falls from my eyes,
tilts my head
back to ground,

muddies my path,
forming puddles
to catch the sky

and a playground
to splash my feet,
spreading out

into a lakebed
where all the life
I have damned

lifts its curse

and there I dive.

 

How do these two versions of the poem affect you? What mood or meaning does each evoke?